Wednesday Words of Wisdom #4 — Hostages


“If something isn’t working, if you have a story that you’ve built and it’s blocked and you can’t figure it out, take your favorite scene, or your very best idea or set-piece, and cut it. It’s brutal, but sometimes inevitable.” ~ Joss Whedon

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I am not surprised to see a quote like this come from someone who’s created some of my favorite characters and then murdered them. Why Wash, why? Still, this is classic advice.

“In writing, you must kill all your darlings.” ~ William Faulkner

As writers, we like our characters. We like our plots We like our settings. And sometimes we get so overfond of them that it’s hard to hear the constructive criticisms they sometimes need. We “kill our darlings” and resurrect them in another form with every fresh round of editing — or maybe we put them to rest and let them stay there. Maybe they’ll reincarnate in a different story entirely someday.

Joss’ quote is more like… holding your darlings hostage. Because taking your best idea out? Your best idea? (My immediate suspicion is that my favorite idea or scene is central, the one I’m building my entire story concept on.) Either you grit your teeth and do it, or you kick into high gear and figure out how to save it. You bargain. You manage another page so that you can justify keeping your favorite.

When it really comes down to it, what would you do? Would you take this advice? Would you need someone else to tell you to write more or cut it? I know I would. Could be a cool group writing exercise.

Daily Writing Progress #7

Tuesday, February 16th

  • Missed this day.

Wednesday, February 17th

  • Missed this day.

Thursday, February 18th

  • Project: Future post B
    • Total Word Count: 505
    • New Words: 279
  • Thoughts: I’m just so relieved to have written anything…?!
  • Tomorrow’s Goal: Maybe write more, maybe take another breather day.

Friday, February 19th

  • Missed this day. But I’ve been taking a lot of world building notes!

Saturday, February 20th

  • Missed this day. Family visited!

Sunday, February 21st

  • Missed this day. Night before the first day nerves.

Monday,  February 22nd

  • Missed this day. First day of my new job! I will get back to writing more soon. 🙂